Hahahahahaha
This would have been great:
a song with ACTUAL purpose and moral message.
but that voice sounds incredibly patronising, hahahahaha
This would probably pull off better as a read poem.
Hahahahahaha
This would have been great:
a song with ACTUAL purpose and moral message.
but that voice sounds incredibly patronising, hahahahaha
This would probably pull off better as a read poem.
Or just a better voice
this was good...
lyrics were great, beat was sick, only thing is, the voice doesn't fit too well.
overall, this was a good track.
Glad you liked it
Great Lyrics
I almost never listen to rap or hiphop, etc, and in fact, I rather hate it, but I happen to admire the lyrics of this one. The beat's good, the lyrics are fantastic, but the voice doesn't fit, in my opinion, and the way the lyrics are sung, just dont quite match, as others have pointed out.
I say congrats on weaseling a seven out of someone like me who doesn't like this genre to begin with. ;D
Glad you could at least look past your dislike of the genre
Okay...
But I didn't think that the voice matched the beat. It was also a little bit choppy, I think it's a mixing problem.
3/10 for music.
9/10 for the lyrics.
6/10
Thanks for the review
:)))
Pretty good story!Is that your voice?
yes it is