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Cardboard City, a Collab

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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 00:40:46


there will now be cola cans in the kitchen. the end

Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 06:25:23


Hey guys, what's up?

I'd like to join this collab. It'll be a while though before I can make my part since I have to finish my Pico Day project first ;)


"Never was anything great achieved without danger." - Niccolo Machiavelli

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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 08:47:18


At 3/13/08 07:08 PM, MorrowDays wrote: 13, Gatling, I think.

I don't think I'll join, I'm sure I'll join! but I have exams right now :( poor me


"What kind of idiot would quote himself" - Gatling

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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 10:10:06


At 3/14/08 06:25 AM, Vincoid wrote: Hey guys, what's up?

I'd like to join this collab. It'll be a while though before I can make my part since I have to finish my Pico Day project first ;)

thats fine, sounds good!

same to you gatling!

Some of us at the SFC just finished a snowboarding collab, what do you guys think?


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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 10:31:00



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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 10:39:05


gorgeous, really well done.


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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 11:19:57


At 3/14/08 10:31 AM, Ziwon wrote: Update

I envy your animating talent!


"What kind of idiot would quote himself" - Gatling

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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 11:28:01


At 3/14/08 10:31 AM, Ziwon wrote: Update

AMAZING!

caps lock

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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 11:52:06


At 3/14/08 10:31 AM, Ziwon wrote: Update

kudos. i love a great deal of that art.

and with that, might I present MY update. It contains the first scene I put up, with some improvements to it, then the beginning of another.

Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 12:13:30


also gorgeous and amazing!


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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 12:42:53


The 2 previews I've seen so far for this are amazing. It makes me intimidated to try :P .

I haven't flashed in like 4 months basically, so i think it would be kinda hard to start again with something this challenging, but i guess if i get bored ill give it a shot.

Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 12:55:39


I forgot to ask about music, sorry for x2 post. But whats the deal with music( i might have missed the rant on music :D ). also if I'm allowed in I started a draft for my part :P

Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 14:17:02


At 3/14/08 12:55 PM, RobbieSkater wrote: I forgot to ask about music

We kinda discussed it. I pitched a band called Jaga Jazzist. Chill, but fast paced at times. It's neat. Check it out. But other than that, not really.

Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 15:46:49


if i do finish a part , it'll look roughly like this

hallway in perspective. to opening door. to view of city. to close on city. to city movement. to erase effect.. it wouldn't be more than 6 seconds probably.
possible draft

Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 15:57:11


At 3/14/08 03:29 PM, Volit0 wrote: First of all MorrowDays is right i am quitting
But look what i just found in my English textbook.

Een engels leesboek met nederlndse tekst?


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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 18:21:56


thats awesome volit0, thanks for showing us.

I saw something cardboard city ish too!

robbieskater, cool draft and idea so far, pretty sweet.

gatling, I dont know what you just said, as it wasnt in english :P


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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 19:26:01


wow this collab seems interesting I will try to whip something up for ya

Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 19:34:46


At 3/14/08 07:26 PM, kinesta wrote: wow this collab seems interesting I will try to whip something up for ya

good good.


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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 20:55:24


At 3/14/08 06:21 PM, MorrowDays wrote: thats awesome volit0, thanks for showing us.

I saw something cardboard city ish too!

Firstly, I think we should put that poem in the beginning of the flash. that would require a little help from volit0. We'd need the text, the author, and perhaps a translation.

Secondly, I really dig that video. I think I may try that. With some padding, that could be truly awesome. Being green is rad.

Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 21:30:01


At 3/14/08 08:55 PM, HandsomeJake wrote: Firstly, I think we should put that poem in the beginning of the flash. that would require a little help from volit0. We'd need the text, the author, and perhaps a translation.

It doesn't look like a poem. More like an article about homeless people in america and great britain


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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-14 22:54:07


hi is there any way that i can still join or is it all filled up


SHEEPS DONT GO "moo"

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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-15 05:31:08


Hey guys, about that poem I found one called Cardboard City Poem: http://www.adriennewolter.com/stories/po etry-cardboardcity.htm

Cardboard City

Sometimes, when I'm this tired
I let my mind wander to the most absurd thoughts
Like what it would be like
Living in a city made of cardboard.
It would suck when it rains.
But I'm sure someone would go ahead and invent
A new kind of cardboard
That's water-resistant.
And maybe it'll do your laundry while it's at it.
It's just that cool.
Unlike me, thinking about living
In a city made of cardboard.
I need some sleep.

By Adrienne Wolter


"What kind of idiot would quote himself" - Gatling

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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-15 05:33:49


Sorry for double post

I found more the last one sucked. It's about the Cardboard city in London

Cardboard City.

In back streets dark, cold and wet
Forgotten figures in corners slept
Ragged figures of human debris
Regrets and rats for company

Cardboard city land of the lost
Afraid of the living, in fear of the frost
Surviving on wits a day at a time
Circumstance their only crime

If fate decreed that they should die
In passing without a single cry
Alone for company only fear
Who alone would shed a tear?

There by fate, and not by choice
Souls in torment, with common voice
Drunks and addicts, so absurd
Vanish daily, their pleas unheard

So spare a thought as you sit to dine
Gulp your beer, or sip your wine
Things taken for granted, as we often do
But for the grace of God, it could be you.

Graham Jones


"What kind of idiot would quote himself" - Gatling

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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-15 12:04:57


Shall we add our names in a special corner or do someone of you want to add them afterwards, nick/moro?


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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-15 15:02:00


I've got an idea brewing for a part, finally.
Just the start of a part though. I need to think of a good middle, and rounding it off at the end


GAH!

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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-15 15:10:16


At 3/15/08 12:04 PM, Ziwon wrote: Shall we add our names in a special corner or do someone of you want to add them afterwards, nick/moro?

I think you can just leave your names off your parts, then Morrow or me will add the names at the end, so everyone has the same kind of text for their name. I think it makes the collab look neater and more sophisticated that way.


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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-15 15:27:06


At 3/15/08 03:10 PM, Nicholas-Deary wrote: I think you can just leave your names off your parts, then Morrow or me will add the names at the end, so everyone has the same kind of text for their name. I think it makes the collab look neater and more sophisticated that way.

Perhaps is with give you a font or some art to display our names, than you just standardize the positioning and presentation. That's how I've seen it done best.

Also, check out the song Airborne on Jaga Jazzist's myspace. That's my pitch for music. But I'd love to hear if anyone else has any ideas for it.

Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-15 16:51:49


Yas, I'll join this:)

i started my part yesterday:) i really like this kinda style now that i've started animating it!

could someone PM me and tell me if sounds are allowed?

thnx <3

Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-16 07:47:59


LOOK AT PREVIEW

Look at privu.

.M.

Cardboard City, a Collab


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Response to Cardboard City, a Collab 2008-03-16 08:43:47


Looks nice, i'm not too fond of the GIANT RED CIRCLE :P but if you change it to a more traditional cardboard it would be more fitting.