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At 5/18/12 09:20 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: Ummm.... WIP. I think.

Hmmm, it's hard to see what you are going for here, I'd say that it needs more work before it is even ready to be posted on this thread as a WIP. Is it a robot running away from a tank? I don't know. Anyway, give it an hour or two more work and then it'll be a lot easy to say where to go with it. Seems a little different to your usual style, are you trying something different?

Haha, It's really just a random doodle. I'm pretty drunk =/

And this is actually the style i'm more used to, sketchy kinda messy weird stuff XD but i very rarely post it since it kinda shitty :(.

This is the doodle so far :3

At 5/18/12 10:17 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: Haha, It's really just a random doodle. I'm pretty drunk =/

Yay for being drunk :3 haha.

And this is actually the style i'm more used to, sketchy kinda messy weird stuff XD but i very rarely post it since it kinda shitty :(.

It's not too bad I like the dark humour of the robot orphanage burning in the background although I'd say at this point it is still quite far away from being art portal worthy. The lines need to be neatened up and the whole picture requires more detail. Basically just spend hours just adding little bits and making it sharper.

This is the doodle so far :3

I know but I think it could be a good piece after (a lot, if i'm honest) more work.

Don't worry~ I won't post it unless it's portal material.
Not even sure if i'm going to finish it. I have about 20 WIP and my comic still to do >.<.

At 5/18/12 09:20 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: Ummm.... WIP. I think.

ive read (and found thorough some experience) that drawing too many lines in the sketchy phase isn't actually beneficial.

I dunno. you might want to clean up the sketches more or make the lines more deliberate.

At 5/19/12 02:30 PM, Spac3case916 wrote:

At 5/18/12 09:20 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: Ummm.... WIP. I think.

ive read (and found thorough some experience) that drawing too many lines in the sketchy phase isn't actually beneficial.

I dunno. you might want to clean up the sketches more or make the lines more deliberate.

Yeah, it's hard work to clean up =[
But I have a astigmatism and can't tell if lines are straight or not sometimes.

Gah Scraped my other picture for the M&A monday flood Sooooo i started another one.

So far I have this.
It's just a start but, C&C please? :3

At 5/19/12 08:08 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: Gah Scraped my other picture for the M&A monday flood Sooooo i started another one.

So far I have this.
It's just a start but, C&C please? :3

BTW it's NOT censored.

At 5/19/12 08:10 PM, BeckyRawr wrote:

At 5/19/12 08:08 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: Gah Scraped my other picture for the M&A monday flood Sooooo i started another one.

So far I have this.
It's just a start but, C&C please? :3

BTW it's NOT censored.

theres the critique about the hands. But since i have a hard time drawing them i cant offer too much help.

her right leg (our left) seems waaaaay to long.

At 5/20/12 03:20 AM, Spac3case916 wrote:

At 5/19/12 08:10 PM, BeckyRawr wrote:

At 5/19/12 08:08 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: Gah Scraped my other picture for the M&A monday flood Sooooo i started another one.

So far I have this.
It's just a start but, C&C please? :3

BTW it's NOT censored.

theres the critique about the hands. But since i have a hard time drawing them i cant offer too much help.

her right leg (our left) seems waaaaay to long.

Sorted her leg out. But damnit I suck at hands. I tried to fix them but they still need more work :(

Updated picture

I like your art. Would be cool If I could draw as good as you.

At 5/21/12 03:17 AM, DoctorStrongbad wrote: I like your art. Would be cool If I could draw as good as you.

I'm glad you like it :D
Anyone can draw if they practice enough.

I have to draw a few hours a day to keep improving.

At 5/21/12 05:17 AM, BeckyRawr wrote: I'm glad you like it :D
Anyone can draw if they practice enough.

I have to draw a few hours a day to keep improving.

I tend to draw machines or cars okay, but people poorly.

At 5/21/12 03:37 PM, DoctorStrongbad wrote:

I tend to draw machines or cars okay, but people poorly.

Anatomy is very hard and requires a lot of practice from drawing from references.
Even the best artists can still struggle with drawing people :3

At 5/21/12 04:57 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: Anatomy is very hard and requires a lot of practice from drawing from references.
Even the best artists can still struggle with drawing people :3

Thanks for your advice and help. I will try harder in the future.

You have very cute drawings, that's the only word I could think of to describe your style.

At 5/21/12 09:40 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: You have very cute drawings, that's the only word I could think of to describe your style.

Haha if you think they suck just say they do :P.

At 5/22/12 04:30 AM, BeckyRawr wrote:

At 5/21/12 09:40 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: You have very cute drawings, that's the only word I could think of to describe your style.

Haha if you think they suck just say they do :P.

I don't believe that Fifty was insulting your work Becky, you do have a style that is pretty hard to discribe without using such words as "cute". How's the drawing for the M&A thing coming along?

At 5/22/12 05:45 AM, Decky wrote:

At 5/22/12 04:30 AM, BeckyRawr wrote:

At 5/21/12 09:40 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: You have very cute drawings, that's the only word I could think of to describe your style.

Haha if you think they suck just say they do :P.

I don't believe that Fifty was insulting your work Becky, you do have a style that is pretty hard to discribe without using such words as "cute". How's the drawing for the M&A thing coming along?

Taking a lil break from it at the moment. Need to experiment more with line art and colouring.

At 5/22/12 06:27 AM, BeckyRawr wrote: Taking a lil break from it at the moment. Need to experiment more with line art and colouring.

Go on a mad tutorial hunt. Go trawling though Youtube on various Photoshop ones and then you'll be able to use what you have learnt to create something truly epic, EPIC I SAY!

At 5/22/12 07:13 AM, Decky wrote:

At 5/22/12 06:27 AM, BeckyRawr wrote: Taking a lil break from it at the moment. Need to experiment more with line art and colouring.

Go on a mad tutorial hunt. Go trawling though Youtube on various Photoshop ones and then you'll be able to use what you have learnt to create something truly epic, EPIC I SAY!

EPIC SOUNDS GOOD! I shall do as you command!

At 5/20/12 03:30 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: Updated picture

its looking better.
make sure it is all shaded, that might make the other hand look better. The area between the thumb and index finger is a bit off but other than that it's decent.

Nice display picture... wow...

Spending most my time on Drawception lately.

My drawception acount

Random practise.

Lil work in progress.
Need to do line art again.

Still working on it -.-

At 6/1/12 09:14 AM, BeckyRawr wrote: Still working on it -.-

lookin good

be sure you dont miss the shading in the palm. Also i think the shading for the folds is off a bit. shouldn't the shading by closer to the actual crease?

At 6/1/12 09:14 AM, BeckyRawr wrote: Still working on it -.-

I like your latest cute girl art. Keep it up. :)