This is where the Main Character is from. By where? i mean sand village

This is a rip off of sasuke and itachi basically, but will end much differently.. Just the "base line"(if that makes any sense) of younger brother hating and wanting revenge on older brother. sleep talking right about now, im saying anything

hmm

you may be adding the script with a computer, however it's still hard to see the line-work on these comics.

At 5/5/11 11:06 PM, Ramatsu wrote:

Yea i can do that and repost them i only have Paint though. so about the panel's ill have to work on those some other time.

Download Gimp, its a free image editing program for those who cannot afford photoshop

At 5/6/11 12:51 AM, silversunned wrote: you may be adding the script with a computer, however it's still hard to see the line-work on these comics.

yea true, i mean i might have to ink the whole thing and re-scan them. or maybe i can use an internet photo editer to deal with the contrast and such.

At 5/6/11 12:56 AM, Matkingos wrote:

Download Gimp, its a free image editing program for those who cannot afford photoshop

okay thanx, i'll give it a try

At 5/6/11 01:03 AM, Ramatsu wrote:

At 5/6/11 12:56 AM, Matkingos wrote:

Download Gimp, its a free image editing program for those who cannot afford photoshop

okay thanx, i'll give it a try

This is new, ill have to get a bit used to it though, don't know how long that'll take but i am off for now

good! :D :D it'll make seeing your comics easier! :D :D

At 5/6/11 12:19 AM, Ramatsu wrote: here's where another rip off comes in (code geass) about the kinghts of the round. the village leaders are known as either deities or King/queen.. knights being for the kings and queens and guardians being for deities.

Knights of the Round isn't really Code Geass' idea.

This is a rip off of sasuke and itachi basically, but will end much differently.. Just the "base line"(if that makes any sense) of younger brother hating and wanting revenge on older brother.

Here's where I really have to point out the unoriginality. The character has pratically the same hair as Sasuke, and the older bro has the lines on his face like Itachi, as well as similar hair, and they both seem to have Sharingan, or something similar. The design seems to be a bit different though, although by now there are like 20 different sharingan designs.

I think some of the backstory could be explained, such as the different abilities and such. Maybe some character sheets too.

The art is pretty nice, and I like it, even if its cluttered and lighter that desired. Will be looking forward to your intuos and Manga Studio. It should help things be a lot clearer, and give better results. If you are still drawing these, I would advise you to get some inking pens (prismacolor, sakura, etc.) to finalize these images and make them a lot clearer. Your scanner will also pick the colors up better.

I got my hands full all this week, I'll get as much done as possible and post some character sheets whenever I have enough time on my hands. Just thought I'd let you all know I didn't forget about the thread and I have been listening, til then later.

Your art improves throughout the comics, and now it's actually possible to read.

I can't say anything about the story, though, because I can't stand to read anime. Speaking of which, you might want to come up with better names for your...spells, or whatever they're called. "Super water clone explosion jutsu" sounds pretty dumb.

On another note, I bet you'd draw good porn.

Hey, I have a bit of time today so I'm going to use what little time I have to work on some character sheets with what little time I have. I would get back to posting the character sheets later on, the pc takes to long to load up so I can't much work on anything else at the time being.

This is the Main character sheet, I've only had the time to get this one done so far. Nowadays i have very little personal time, But there will be more to come, i will be getting as many done as i can. Ramatsu is actually one of the siblings of the main character, is where i get my user name from.

Shukaku of the Matsuki clan, Is the Source of sand (source meaning able to control freely at will, infinite supply of it). He has adapted to be known as the Forbidden source, now able to change the flows of time; recreating and aging things, able to travel to past and future. Matsukigan is the name of the eye his clan possesses, it is named after their clan because of the fact that no one thing out of their clan posses or being able to possess it. Its ability to learn any technique it see's and forever within its user's use. Baku-Matsukigan is the 2nd form only Shukaku is known to possess it, its ability is able learn techniques without even seeing them just looking at the target and forever stored has his own wether a bloodline or not he is able to use it at his will.

Long ago there was a war between lands the side the Matsuki clan was on prevailed, The reason being when chaos is about the Matsuki generates chakra non-consciencly. They cannot die in battle only by natural causes that unless two members are fighting eachother. It is rumored that the Matsuki clan is graced by the Gods, Others say that the Matsuki clan is the Gods themselves.

I apologize about all the mistakes and things and unreal words and names lol. But tell me what you think and I forgot to add the color key. Shukaku's hair is WHITE, the darks on his garments are RED, while the shaded part in his eyes are BLUE.

Is this right?

At 5/13/11 03:08 PM, DNoack757 wrote: Is this right?

Lol! not quite i think she'd be a little bit more happy or sad if anything.

this is just something i worked on the passed day i had time for myself, she came to me in a dream it was weird because instead of myself i was her. Long story, but as for the picture itself the background pissed me off i couldn't get it the way i wanted it the background is just there to imply some story nd what you can get out of it. Her name is Utsukushii meaning beautiful in japanese and her last name Yuubi meaning elegance, she's like a walking contradiction.

Oh... What?

At 5/20/11 09:33 AM, Blahface wrote: Oh... What?

People can only do this so much until it's like " WTF dude the joke is old, and not abit amusing in the least" but, yeah my life made a big turn around recently, I have little time to do anything in my own time anymore it's gotten very busy.

At 5/22/11 12:32 PM, Ramatsu wrote:

At 5/20/11 09:33 AM, Blahface wrote: Oh... What?

People can only do this so much until it's like " WTF dude the joke is old, and not abit amusing in the least" but, yeah my life made a big turn around recently, I have little time to do anything in my own time anymore it's gotten very busy.

It was old the moment they started mocking a person making an honest attempt at a comic.

People these days.

At 5/22/11 12:32 PM, Ramatsu wrote: People can only do this so much until it's like " WTF dude the joke is old, and not abit amusing in the least" but, yeah my life made a big turn around recently, I have little time to do anything in my own time anymore it's gotten very busy.

I should no have started it in the first place. Sorry : <
Keep posting though, as long as you're having fun, I can't blame you.

At 5/22/11 01:21 PM, test-object wrote:
I should no have started it in the first place. Sorry : <
Keep posting though, as long as you're having fun, I can't blame you.

I mean it wasn't really a problem but after the 1st few it's just like really? But yea I'm working on more and I'm typing off my iPod, what usually took me a couple hours now takes me days just to get one thing done, so I've just been working on scene pictures lately.

This is a 5 min sketch of a character i have for this "Utsukushii Yuubi" series, just an early development of him. I noticed after i scanned it that i forgot to put his foot wear, but it will show in another piece that ill be posting as (WIP).

This will be a part in the "Utsukushii yuubi" series (not the final title, just the protagonists name) that will happen sometime later on in the series. This is what i'm working on until the colors i ordered for this ROBOTDAY2011 piece come in, so i can finish that. But once that's done back to this.

And just now noticing that they are too light.. ill repost the Part piece later.. FML gotta run some errands!

Heres the final sketches for it before i ink and color. just anything needs to be changed before i cant erase Lol. I might start the series soon and post it up on new grounds as i go. As a web comic? but if i do i hope people will be interested. I will go about saying what it is about when im about ready to kick it off.

I will now begin the inking and coloring. Hopefully my new colors come in tomorrow so i can finish my Robotday2011 picture. Because starting friday its going to be abit of a problem finishing it and getting it in on time so i don't get points deducted!!!

This is just a part sometime in the plot of this "utsukishii Yuubi"( not the final title) series i might turn into a web comic, and then hopefully actually get the series published some day,but 1st things 1st i need to cover all of the basics at learning to be a better artist, The web comic will only be like the prototype. This is also still a WIP i have to put the shading in with the GIMP program, just to further my skills into working with Computer illustrating.

Would be much better if i had my tablet already then i could start fully Creating Digital "Masterpieces". Oh by the way this paper is slightly bigger then my friends scanner so it cut off some Non-important things, just saying because it looks a bit weird.

Got a couple overall character pieces done just somethings i sketched. This first piece is a young female either late teens or early 20s. she in alliance with the organization named "fate" or "destiny", she is from a clan by the name yuumei meaning "dark and light". She very much acts like a child being playful but can get serious if it comes down to it.

This is the other sketch, he goes by Shikatsu " life and death". not much is known about him personally, he is feared all around the world(note: its a planet called lebanon, in a different solar system; not earth). it is said that if death has a physical form he is it. while others say he gives life to those that should not be dying at the time. His weapon is a sythe and a samurai sword at the bottom. the sythe is like the holster to the sword, while the sythe reaps the soul the sword seals it(also the sword gives life back to something dying. he levitates and does not have to wield the weapon in order to attack with it.