1st page last panel, I have no Idea what's going on with the girl with outrageous tits, where's her hand?
The panel placement is atrocious, if you can't fit it neatly into 1 page, don't just cram it in there, just continue it on another page. Which brings me to the second page.
I have no idea which direction I'm supposed to be looking at this in, but I can't make heads or tails of it left or right. Wouldn't he call out the summon before it comes out and not after?
Actions scenes are fine, but this is only the 2nd page and it's already a total clusterfuck.