At 3/12/15 05:18 AM, saloani wrote:
Hi. Need some critique.
I pot a lot of time in this. hope to hear something.
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/98ede6f2b8c1d7e81cabf5b6c9ad8d72
it looks pretty cute :)
if you want to take it to the next level though, you should use references next time, for the anatomy and posture.
and if you spend some time on creating strong, aesthetic poses for the key positions i.e. the start, the and and maaaybe the "fly", it could look even better! for starters, check the arms.
keep it up, you have a lot of potential there!