Needs more
Hmm, there are two major issues with the piece which leaps off the start block at me. The first is the "teddy bear ears", which look like you've sewn a patch of cloth over the front of his ear. The second is the "seam" running straight down the forehead. More smoothing required, as I've never met anyone with that kind of regularity to a facial feature.
The moustache gives a very stern look to the butler character, but I would not have said that one's butler is posh enough to warrant a monocle. A pair of spectacles would be tolerable, but Monocles are clichéd indicators of upper class, not one's manservant.
Similarly to your other piece, you could do with some background and more context. While this piece fits the frame better (consider narrowing it down slightly), it could use shoulders to the left of the picture, as we look at it.
Clearly, the program is easy to manipulate, so a little more attention to detail will reap greater benefits.
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