Heres some help
Ok... you got somethin goin there. First... general things...Needs more sound, like backround music etc... like a lot of it... Graphics, something thats kinda hard but u really gotta work on... it was ok but it can always be better...Second, more specific things... the words, they were ok, but they could be improved upon by 1) Making them into a speech bubble, making them bigger, or both and 2)Create a button so that we need as much time as we can... i didnt have a problem but others do... Graphics specifically...try making movement loops so that the picture doesnt get fucked like in the begining when hes walking... legs always gettin shitty and it leaves residue that doesnt look good... if u need help, try searching for tutorials on newgrounds, u can find how to make loops, tween, and create frame buttons... check it out and i hope u do better in the future... good luck