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Reviews for "Mathew"

Hmmmm. What was that????

not sure what any of that was going on about........you may be holding it back til the second one but either way i didnt have a clue and have no desire to see another one. I dont think many will like this movie but if it is your first one then fair enough. The movie may have taken you a long time and i know this is not the shit you want to hear but i think you should pay a little more attention to detail and clear some of the errors up. .......saying all that tho if you really are seeking help and need some i could offer it however dont go off my submissions im only trying to be funny with mine.

Dark182 responds:

As you don't have a desire to see another, I don't have a desire to make one. I think I'm just going to drop this flash for now, just work on something else and try to learn how to draw.

eh

Eh... what I would like to say is, 'WTF WAS THAT, DUDE?' But instead I will just tell you that you need a lil work on your people... they're a lil iffy and look like a bunch of shapes thrown on top of eachother. The building at the beginning was done quite well, n then I saw the guy n thought, 'Whoa.' Not completely horrible for a 1st tho. *~Bri~*

Dark182 responds:

Yeah, the main thing that I suck at drawing are people. I'm okay at drawing building's, not to great though.. Oh yeah, and to answer your quest on WTF was that.. To tell you the truth, I don't know myself.

For a first attempt, not bad...

There are several things you could do to improve your movies. First, make the people more realistic looking. Ears and arms would help. Also, take care with the edges where different colors meet; there are a few places where they're not straight. Shading would also help give a sense of depth. Finally, and this is a problem LOTS of people have, make absolutely sure your text doesn't have typos and that your grammar, syntax, and word usages are all correct. :-)

Dark182 responds:

shading, didn't even think of that. Typos, I'm really bad at spelling and grammer and this no exeption I guess.. Oh well, Peace.

What the hell is going on here?

This movie borders on complete crap and artistic experimentation. Its your first movie and it kinda scares me, not because of the content but because of the graphics. You can make movies and took an honest stab at one, next time go deeper and you'll have a better movie. This movie hurts my brain...im done.

BOOM!

Dark182 responds:

Artistic experiment is right.. I was learning more and more of flash as I made this.

OK

It sucks. Just kidding. It was really good for a first. All I can think of is work on the character's movements, u know, better fluidity. Ya...... The blood stuff was kinda unrealistic as well. It literally exploded onto some surface when all the guy was hit by was a knife. Anyway, good job

Dark182 responds:

The movements and the blood..That was very poorly done. Yeah, I think I need to learn more about Mac Flash.