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good story line... but i can make better graphics on powerpoint.. this was good for your first movie i admit... but you need to use motion tween a litte more and use more frames for the people... but good job man i kinda liked it.. the music was kool
Thanks man! yay I've been doing all that latly and stuff.. im getting better, just takes practice i guess.. but thanks for the feedback
good for the first movie
i got to admitt it good for the first movie. just keep at the animation and the next movie u make will be alot better
Thanks man
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Well since you want me to say something more then the word "sucks" i guess i could spare some time and write a few lines. First of all your graphics are kinda messy and way too raw. Try experimenting with colours, shadows. Your "3D" environment in the beginning is kinda crooked as well. Also, at some point then This Kevin James dude or whatever walks down the pavements, his feet seem to erase the pavement line on yur drawing. I think it's because you had it all stacked onto one layer, which would explain why your work is all messy. Try using different layers for different things, say one layer for background and another for the character. This wasy your background will remain intact and you won't have to sit there correcting it in every single frame.
Thank you, I'll keep that in mind. Thank you for taking the time to write that.
It sucked.
The music is the best aspect of this submission. The animation, the graphics, and plot are all laking is substance. You need to refine them all before submitting.
yeah, right now I'm working on my drawing and just learning more about flash.
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I can see that you put much effort into this and that you show much potential. Just work on your animation a bit and you will be a great flash artist. Despite the animation I liked this one. best of luck. and keep trying.
Thanks. Right now I'm getting better at animation but it's going to take a bit. Thanks for your support.