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Heh kinda silly, but then not, it did give off a scary feel to it with the music, and nice touch with some of the flashing, the animation could use some work, and kinda looks like you used paint from the computer settings, ohwell, not so round on the faces next time...
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Hey, yah, the faces in that are really round.. what was i thinking.
yoyr almost there.
work on your animation. make things smoother, and use layers and take your time. it is a great story and i dont expect your characters to have voices b/c it is hard to get a mic. so i understand that, but your motions and such do need work. your sound was very wel put together though. and one more thing, try to have more motion more of the time, trust me. people like to see movement so give it to them. keep it up and just do your best dude!
-matman-
Yah, thanks for the review and for the tips ( and for not just saying "Omgzz, you suck so much ass.. rofl newb, eat my shit" or something liek that)
Good idea
The idea was good But you need to improve in your style
Like the other say....More layer
Motion Tween and try to learn a WALK animation
Yah, my animation skills are kind of crap
ok
you need to improve on;
no1 motion tween
no2 layer
no3 pictures
i suggest that you click help, tutorials. that really helps. a movie is greatly improved by those factors. if you cant do action script, its the language of flash, LEARN IT NOW...
it is really important.
its a good first timer.
Cool, thanks.
kinda good
now im spooked thow......
my name is kevin.........
Yes kevin! Rock on, and I will hunt you down and kill you in an alley.