Not bad.
See here's the deal, I am a critic, I don't make flash movies, therefore I don't know or care about any flash techniqes that could make your movie better. My advice is to work on you animation, cause it really, and I mean really sucks. However I will give you credit for acctually trying instead of just doing those stupid fucking stick figures. You have a good vision, just work on you animation and you have the potentail make a truly great movie.