What the hell is going on here?
This movie borders on complete crap and artistic experimentation. Its your first movie and it kinda scares me, not because of the content but because of the graphics. You can make movies and took an honest stab at one, next time go deeper and you'll have a better movie. This movie hurts my brain...im done.
BOOM!
Artistic experiment is right.. I was learning more and more of flash as I made this.
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The animation was very choppy. You need to learn how to use motion tweens. The art was lacking in all ways. You just need to practice a lot more.
yeah, I need alot more practice. Right now I'm just making practice flash movies so I can work on animation, drawing, etc.
Hmmmm. What was that????
not sure what any of that was going on about........you may be holding it back til the second one but either way i didnt have a clue and have no desire to see another one. I dont think many will like this movie but if it is your first one then fair enough. The movie may have taken you a long time and i know this is not the shit you want to hear but i think you should pay a little more attention to detail and clear some of the errors up. .......saying all that tho if you really are seeking help and need some i could offer it however dont go off my submissions im only trying to be funny with mine.
As you don't have a desire to see another, I don't have a desire to make one. I think I'm just going to drop this flash for now, just work on something else and try to learn how to draw.
Okay
Well since you want me to say something more then the word "sucks" i guess i could spare some time and write a few lines. First of all your graphics are kinda messy and way too raw. Try experimenting with colours, shadows. Your "3D" environment in the beginning is kinda crooked as well. Also, at some point then This Kevin James dude or whatever walks down the pavements, his feet seem to erase the pavement line on yur drawing. I think it's because you had it all stacked onto one layer, which would explain why your work is all messy. Try using different layers for different things, say one layer for background and another for the character. This wasy your background will remain intact and you won't have to sit there correcting it in every single frame.
Thank you, I'll keep that in mind. Thank you for taking the time to write that.
lol
not too good. look at 'TIN:the incompetent ninja'. that was that guys first flash and its (i think) in the top 50 flashes ever. he only needed to mvoe one leg to walk. things on screen kept disapperaing and reappering... :\ sorry