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Reviews for "Mathew"

((( HEH )))

Heh kinda silly, but then not, it did give off a scary feel to it with the music, and nice touch with some of the flashing, the animation could use some work, and kinda looks like you used paint from the computer settings, ohwell, not so round on the faces next time...

~X~

Dark182 responds:

Hey, yah, the faces in that are really round.. what was i thinking.

Keep working at it

Things you had: plot, good music, and an 'ok' idea. You need to work on fluidity of motion (doors opening, walking, blood flow, etc.) and look at some more natural graphics (blood splatters [it was a knife, not a bazooka], hair, text). Everything was also very 2D, you could use some more shadow. I still say that it was not the worst thing I've seen on the portal, and some of the crap I have seen has come from more "experienced" hands. I say pretty damn good in comparison...

Dark182 responds:

I guess it did look like the guy was getting blown apart instead of being stabbed,..once.. I need to really work on characters and motion alot more . Thanks.

eh

Eh... what I would like to say is, 'WTF WAS THAT, DUDE?' But instead I will just tell you that you need a lil work on your people... they're a lil iffy and look like a bunch of shapes thrown on top of eachother. The building at the beginning was done quite well, n then I saw the guy n thought, 'Whoa.' Not completely horrible for a 1st tho. *~Bri~*

Dark182 responds:

Yeah, the main thing that I suck at drawing are people. I'm okay at drawing building's, not to great though.. Oh yeah, and to answer your quest on WTF was that.. To tell you the truth, I don't know myself.

kinda good

now im spooked thow......
my name is kevin.........

Dark182 responds:

Yes kevin! Rock on, and I will hunt you down and kill you in an alley.

Good idea

The idea was good But you need to improve in your style

Like the other say....More layer
Motion Tween and try to learn a WALK animation

Dark182 responds:

Yah, my animation skills are kind of crap