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Cheesy diolgue but overall quite charming. has an anime feel without bieng too'animeish' if you get me?
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Cheesy diolgue but overall quite charming. has an anime feel without bieng too'animeish' if you get me?
Meh~
It was pretty original, I'll give you that. But original doesn't always mean good. I like your concepts and environment, but it's missing a lot of pieces.
Overall the whole thing was pretty boring, not much happened. Your voice acting leaves a LOT to be desired. Yes, a better microphone would help, but the acting itself was also very stale.
There's some potential here, but I'd say it needs more of an overhaul than a sequel.
Its okay.
IT was good. Storyline will definently make it a winner but maybe a bit better animation, voice syncing needs to be better, and better voice quality
not bad, but could be better
It has a good color to it and an interesting idea of a night club.
So you could improve on two things~
1. The sound quality of the voices (sounds like it was recorded on a phone)
2. lip sinking (you got pretty close on this one but it still needs work)
it's ok
The art is good, the opening bit seems a little fragmented there were moments that the animation wouldn't keep up with it self, but maybe that was just for me. When the fire cracker rolled down the hill for a frame it disappeared then reappeared.
The Voices could use some work. I'd really blame a lot of it on the mics. They kind of sound like your not using a very good mic. Like maybe it came with a web cam. Also the "Rag Time" character seems to be trying to do what I think is a Latino/Brooklyn accent.
In general it seems like an ok series but really I have no clue about anything about the characters or any reason I should come back to it other than slight curiosity as to who that guy was. And I'm not just saying that to be a dick.