Well...
The effort was enough but i know you guys could have done way better, I'd advice you review the scrip and twitch with it, perhaps a bit of brainstorm if possible. Also there was a bit of unsync so you might also want to work on that too.
Well...
The effort was enough but i know you guys could have done way better, I'd advice you review the scrip and twitch with it, perhaps a bit of brainstorm if possible. Also there was a bit of unsync so you might also want to work on that too.
Interesting
Caught my attention as it developed, the story is pretty much nonexistent, and it was a little short, but the interaction and character personalities are very nice, this can be awesome if worked on a little more and you have something awesome!
Very good but...
The story needs some tuning...
Seems a little confusing at the start.
i really like your character designs
they are very recognizable and unique
your story is definatly going somewhere and i cant wait for the next episode
im really not too wild about the voices they seem kind of bad and there were a few cliche lines in there that made me gag a little
but overall i still liked it very much and adore your characters and ideas
What a clever loading screen.