Sound!
Character voices need more personality and needs more background music. Other than that it's great.
Sound!
Character voices need more personality and needs more background music. Other than that it's great.
Almost perfect.
I am really intrigued by this; the animation was nice, although choppy in some bits, the illustrations and characters look really good and the voiceover's weren't too shabby either.
Over all; I hope you're serious about this, because its caught my eye and would like to see you advance the story along with your skills.
Perfect but..
Sound quality is a bit off.
Interesting
I liked it and want to see more, but I was kinda confused because it seemed to start in the middle of the story.
Hey! Quality story!
Not something one would expect from a flash! A remarkable story, and I can already see the characters beginning to form! I am looking forward very much to seeing the continuation of this series... I understand the length must be short so you could easily upload it, though.