Sound!
Character voices need more personality and needs more background music. Other than that it's great.
Reviews for "Swingers Episode 1"
Hey! Quality story!
Not something one would expect from a flash! A remarkable story, and I can already see the characters beginning to form! I am looking forward very much to seeing the continuation of this series... I understand the length must be short so you could easily upload it, though.
Well...
The effort was enough but i know you guys could have done way better, I'd advice you review the scrip and twitch with it, perhaps a bit of brainstorm if possible. Also there was a bit of unsync so you might also want to work on that too.
Very good but...
The story needs some tuning...
Seems a little confusing at the start.
i really like your character designs
they are very recognizable and unique
your story is definatly going somewhere and i cant wait for the next episode
im really not too wild about the voices they seem kind of bad and there were a few cliche lines in there that made me gag a little
but overall i still liked it very much and adore your characters and ideas