Very good but...
The story needs some tuning...
Seems a little confusing at the start.
Reviews for "Swingers Episode 1"
i really like your character designs
they are very recognizable and unique
your story is definatly going somewhere and i cant wait for the next episode
im really not too wild about the voices they seem kind of bad and there were a few cliche lines in there that made me gag a little
but overall i still liked it very much and adore your characters and ideas
It's OK.
Make everything move more smoothly. The scenes were too rushed, especially the ones with the bird-guy.
it was good
needs work though but good
hahaha
Cheesy diolgue but overall quite charming. has an anime feel without bieng too'animeish' if you get me?