Your artwork was so unique, as was your style, and transitions. It was a real thrill for the eyes. What an imagination you have.
However, if i were to suggest anything, I would narrate the poem, so it doesn take away from viewing your beautiful artowrk. It was hard to enjoy the flash, and read the poem at the same time. Thats the only negative about the flash, however, also without added sound it got a little boring, but again, it was easily overshadowed by your flash as a whole.
Brilliant stuff, hope to see more from you.