That was nice
Really REALLY loved your use of masking. All those textures and patterns... Your leaf wipe was nice as well. Only problem I really had with it was that I have no idea what the poem said. Because it was in the top left and not in a font that can be read out the corner of the eye, the overload of great visuals demanded more attention. But, with out the poem, I'm guessing a bit of the story is lost.
I'm not really sure how you could have fixed this, other than using a more basic font, because you really don't want the text to cover up the visuals.
Anywho, Happy Valentines Day!