It was nice
The sound and voice acting was great, and even though the characters had big heads, it was still nice. You should work on the animation though, it felt really awkward and needs more work.
It was nice
The sound and voice acting was great, and even though the characters had big heads, it was still nice. You should work on the animation though, it felt really awkward and needs more work.
Well done.
Not bad, I really like the art style.
The animation is a little rough at times, though...
Better but still not the best
Probably wasting my time reviewing thi sas it is part of a series and you yourself mentioned in the author's comments that it isn't of best quality but what I will say is that you need to learn how to be lazy, not in a way that you slack of on the important parts just learn what needs detail and what doesn't and put more effort into important things (like movement). So far with the series Im curious as to how things move forward but not really impressed with anything so far. Keep it up though because this is a dramatic improvement from the last episode.
the art has some problems
Your proportions are soooo fucked up some times, in this case the amount of time spent on the head should also be spent on the body. Also the animation is crap on the legs. spend more bodies and try better mics
laura...
again ....it needs to get better graphs. ^^ gambarey XD