^.^ gj
u can only get better from here keep it up .
Reviews for "Asaroki 02- Encouter"
Well done.
Not bad, I really like the art style.
The animation is a little rough at times, though...
Not bad, kept my attention
I've seen worse, also seen better. The graphics have potential, but the animation is incredibly annoying because of the over-use of tweening. There was little to no frame-by-frame here. I'll watch the series though because I'm interested in the story. Good job, good luck =)
ArtistGamerGal responds:
yeah i totally agree. I need to do work on making a happy combination of frame by frame AND tweens.
BTW- i looked at some of your stuff, VERY COOL! :3
Good in context.
I enjoyed this.
There were indeed a few problems - the proprtions and perspective is often wrong - the lead character's legs look inhumanly stumpy at the start and when cars are driving, it looks noticably like a picture zooming in, rather than us being able to 'believe' that it's a car. I think that's because of the perspective being subtly wrong for the way it's meant to be driving.
Her head when she wakes up or paints is far larger than it seems when we see her from nearby, in the head& shoulder shots. However, since you know it's not perfect, I won't bother going on. I look forward to seeing what your more recent animation looks like.
We're obviously still in the early stages of the story, this episode just introducing us to this character, reafirming that the little girl exists and bringing in some agency, in the form of the 'crow' right into the lead character's path.
Not terribly exciting, but after episode 1, I was engaged enough to sit it through. I just hope that the pay-off isn't a disappointment.
The length was near-perfect. Didn't feel like 5 minutes. We got a good amount of plot and it ended on a solid cliffhanger.
But if you're releasing these one a month, it's gonna be an agonising wait for fans.
ArtistGamerGal responds:
Thanks for the informative review. I think you're right, maybe I should try and post the other episodes sooner. Thanks for the advice! Please let me know what you think of future episodes!
-Laura<3
I remember this got blammed...
...the first time you submitted it.
I saw it in the Obituaries.
ArtistGamerGal responds:
actually it wasnt blammed... i deleted it because it didnt work right, unless that counts as a blam? i dont have any blam counts so i dont think it does... but either way...
you should tell me what you think of the movie next time!