This is awesome... man is this is awesome!
The piano intro is emotional, sweet sounding the strings come in at just about the right level.
When your synths start to come in the song stays calm till your quieted lead begins building a lot of energy, I really like that!
Your kick is great.
I think the snare sounds good, but it needs not really more punch... but to sound a little different from the drum, you can fix that by layering another snare with it to give it the bass, the echo, and the punch that you need... not really a complaint, I liked what you had, this is just some advice to improve...
I liked your sub, it keeps everything from feeling too dry and empty.
Other than that it stays pretty simple, though simple is not always bad, I really don't have much else to describe.... It sounds great. Excellent work!
I'm glad to see a musical author who credits the one who gave us breathe to breathe and lungs to breathe it! I'd love it if you'd check out one or two of my newer songs, I still have a long way to go, but I'd love to get some support from you!
Thank you, for honoring God.