Very SouthPark idealised drawing
*sigh* ok I liked the plot, it had an 'ok' Character development for the time used... but although I love south park; the lacking in animation expertise is used for comedy and therefore is not suited for this genre. the story line was well plotted, perhaps could have used a little more elaboration but I would re-do the animation with a sensual, flowing feel to it. not so harsh.
<3 HappyG and I hope you don't think this too harsh