Cliche and non fitting.
Seen the same old story 100 times, it's an old plot now. The ending was relatively new, but still, nothing special. This is a bland at best story line. If this does continue, try a more original approach. At least avoid the cliche dialog.
The graphics where decently done, but as said before, completely unfitting. If your going for a drama-tragedy like this, you can NOT use anything that even resembles South Park. It really really does hurt the story and the mood.
Music was fitting, sound was acceptable, no serious complaints in this department.
So yeah, I know it's been said before, but with the dialog and graphics, I can't find it in me to take this seriously.
-Puffs