what?
sorry, didnt like it much.
firstly, everything was done in a very south-park-ish style, which is only okay when you include tons of swearing, which you didnt, considering there were only about five words spoken in the entire movie.
OKAY. flaws. The people didnt move, the text was way to small, I think it would have been more interesting if you had an unrelated voice say everything that was at the bottom of the screen, um. yeah. When the guy went to the girls house, the mouth movements werent amazing, the audio wasnt great, and how would he even know where she lived?! (stalker)
Afterwards, when he was sitting on the bench, having a red haired girl come over with a note was kinda weird, like, seriously, when your standing next to the person, you dont give them a note. kinda pointless? yes. Also about that scene, the position his hand was in wouldn't really have lent itself to holding a cigarette, it looked as though it was just kinda propped above his hand on some random layer in flash. The whole plot twist with him having chased chased the wrong girl was really confusing, especially since she never would have still recognized him. The whole having his friends come along with him to england seemed pretty... forced... because they didnt appear again after that. Also, why was the red headed chick in england anyways?? Very strange. After I was suitably confused by all that, some random stranger came along and shot the guy's head. WTF? Why?
The advice I give you is this: develop your characters more! without any personality, the whole plot goes to waste, and its not very interesting at all for your audience. Other people may have enjoyed it enough to get it the daily feature, but in my opinion, this wasnt worth it.
Thanks,
Morrowdays