I liked it
It was very good, I dont know if it was a true story but it was good anyway.
The only thing that botherd me was the graphics, they were allright but you could of improved them a lot. Other than that it was very good.
Keep up the good work!
aww
aww... make a sequel! Please!!
ahahahahaha
i just watched 1-5 and man...
you had me until the gunshot.
i actually laughed out loud at how random it was. I didn't expect it to end so quickly though.
i enjoyed it overall, i guess, so i gave you a this one a 5.
keep it up
Finish It Off!
You have a great series, and nice story going here. I actually started with this episode, and was kinda moved by it so I decided to check out the series from the top. In terms of the story, the theme isn't exactly a new one--but that isn't a criticism, because love stories have been around forever, and honestly, there's only so many ways to do a love story. There isn't a whole lot of work on Newgrounds like this, and while I don't really advocate a whole lot of these types of stories in the portal, your series definitely fills a niche here. In a previous episode, you alluded to real stories having endings. In that respect, the story sort of demands at least one more episode. Just my two cents. Great work, and I'm looking forward to catching the end of it! =)
V. Good
But with the ending...I mean a story has the hero or herione, they want something then an something gets in the way, after overcoming this thing then they get what they wanted all along. However you ending (his or her death) was a bit too fast and it worsened the movie, you should have left it at the happy conclusion. However apart from the ending its was pretty awesome.