TY
ty for helping me out with my history homework. i was just slacking off from my work and then i found this so im giving u a five just because u got me at least a B with all the other info i had. TY AGAIN!!!!
Reviews for "The Civil War - Hotc"
Rammer responds:
yay! i helped! glad you liked it, a B?! and...um....thanks for the 5 (:
very simple
Sure it could use more detail, but this is a very informitive flash. I'm not a big gun buff, so I learned soem things about guns. It could have used some more violence to go alone with the theme. I enjoyed learning something new.
Rammer responds:
if i put in violence, i would probably get ISS...this WAS a school project, after all :P
but yeah, i was in a rush and didnt get to do much detail
((( CUTE )))
Simple and cute, the backrounds and main character was cool but abit simple, the idea was right on but all just abit simple, could add some detail into the character and backround, for a better effect, cute though...
~X~
Rammer responds:
cute to the third power. when i add a lot of detail, it looks stupid, so i try to make it look simple but nice (:
you said it yourself it was boring...
That's 4 long minutes...i'm really patient in life(so you don't have any excuse!) but man we are not in school are we! Add some buttons to skip the text when we finish reading (i can give you the code if you want).
You tried to make it funny, but only one time(i didn't go until the end sorry) and i think in a educational thing it has to be more funny(first if you want to keep pple interested by your animation, to make them remember every time if you asked them about what they saw).
So maybe you could try to put more funny stuff (no too much) and maybe some action?(well you are better placed to know that school is boring, and there is always old stuff and....)
good luck!!
ps : I think if you use code your animation will be less than its current size...^_^
Rammer responds:
i see youre competent enough to realize that we arent in school. that surprises me about hte newgrounds community, because of all these retards. i can code myself, ive done a lot more flash than you, i bet. you have no flash on newgrounds, maybe none of your stuff is decent enough? theres nothing like a "critic" that doesnt read my authors comments or other reviews, or has any flash, is there? anyway, my class seemed plenty interested, and thats all that really matters. if you read the authors comments, or the other reviews, you would know that i didnt have enough time to do anything more.
dont act stupid, i really couldnt have had any major action, not with my cranky old hag of a teacher and my 2-day work time. stop trying to be intelligent, you have to watch the whole movie before you can critisize it, durr. try making flash before you critisize it.
(ps, i think the file size was low enough. for minutes, gradients, frame-by-frame, music, sounds, and a helluva lot of tweens. i think its surprising the file size is this low, but yeah i agree. the only thing i couldve done really as load the music through code.)
(pss, if it was funny in one part, how come i have a 0 in humor?)
Quite nice
Hehe, the guy was kinda cute looking.
I liked how you made it semi-interesting to those of us who could care less about guns of the civil war (I being one of those people)
Yep, nice and long for its file size.
So yeah, it's educational, however, its mostly just a bunch of statistics. So its hard for all of this information to get stuck in my head.
Anyways, I liked the animation and everything, just not the subject. Therefor, I think I shall go give the rest of your works a looksie.
Oh yeah, and what was the grade you got?
Rammer responds:
ill email you when i get the grade ;) im guessing i got an A, though. i did a 4 page report along with this, and alone it would be a B, but since im doing this is defeinetly an A. sorry you didnt like the subject, but i know its a bit...boring. my other stuff is a lot better, except for my other project which wade was supposed to delete....thanks!