A very little bit boring.......
This is my entry for 1st round of the NMAE tournament (made in 21 days). The theme was "sweet and sour". I wanted to challenge myself a bit, so I decided to go with something film noir-inspired.
To be honest I ended up getting a bit bored with this animation, and no matter how much I stared at it it didn't seem to help. Buuut at least I've got a list of things that worked as well as things that didn't now.
I can recommend watching this in higher quality on my youtube channel: www.youtube.com/Hikarian0 02
A very little bit boring.......
Great animation skills done in a short notice, I can see that you got talent. Your animation story is interesting, movements are fluid, voice acting are synced and cool. I don't have to say much as most of the reviewers below me had pointed out your animation's strengths and weaknesses. Such as cloudy, short, need more such series, more potential to be a story, etc.
P.S. The voice of the detective kinds of somehow reminds me of Snake from Metal Gear Solid. :/
I like the musc in this one. and the animtion and charator design. But the backgrounds are a litthe cloudy. And it was maybe a little to short. but other then that, it was great. 5/5 from me
9/10 for image quality (flash)
10/10 for story
10/10 for voice actor and sound track
Really really nice
Still have no idea how you made this in 21 days! So awesome!
And SirUndead's voice... My goodness!