I guess if I was more into "Bioshock" I would've liked this more. I was impressed by how it just used Egoraptor. I thought it would be too short. It actually was of fairly good length. It still wasn't good. It just wasn't that funny.
I was a bit turned off by the squiggly lines. That wasn't in Egoraptor's stuff. I don't think that's your style either. Whatever, it just wasn't memorable. You've made much better stuff.
This is one of the best Bioshock movies I have seen so far
pretty funny not gonna lie.
But try redoing it with a few more scenes and slightly better animating (but don't make it too good or else it wont have the same feel as the original awesomes like awesome the hedgehog and metal gear awesome).