I guess if I was more into "Bioshock" I would've liked this more. I was impressed by how it just used Egoraptor. I thought it would be too short. It actually was of fairly good length. It still wasn't good. It just wasn't that funny.
I was a bit turned off by the squiggly lines. That wasn't in Egoraptor's stuff. I don't think that's your style either. Whatever, it just wasn't memorable. You've made much better stuff.