The environment is mindblowingly beautiful. The mood is great too. Nice tension when you showed that the character wasn't alone.
My own two cents on the running thing :)) Maybe let the shoulders move too. I think the steps are a bit too wide apart, and the up and down motion of the body for each step is a bit exaggerated.
Reviews for "PHASE ONE"
beautiful atmosphere, great lighting, and fantastic camera movement. The feeling of the factory was superb, however the deduction of .5 is because the character was sprinting and always went from one side of the shot to the other, i fell like if the character had maybe been walking or perhaps doing some sort of motion to give the character a little more depth i would have enjoyed it more. Also i dont mean you should have had the character walk all the way across the shot, i mean that the panoramic feel could have been created without an entrance and an exit
Nice work, I know how much work goes into an animation like this. Awesome enviornments, I like how you did a nice job of making the facility seem huge. Maybe toss on some grungy textures to it, sense its an abandoned facility it shouldnt be spotless. Rust, dust, grease smears, oil leaks, etc. I liked the guy actually. and nice camera work looking through his helmet. Only suggestion i have, and others have said it to, his walk/run cycle were a bit rough. He covered a tad too much distance for the run you had for him and he didnt transfer his weight at all. Even robots have to shift weight from leg to leg to distribute the weight of the body. Now some will argue that he could be in space so gravity is different but even then the arch of his run was a little flat for that. But that just comes with practice and constant observation. Like I said before, over all nice work, and im looking forward to what you do next!
good clean animation although slenderman was creepy enough without a space suite
I definitely agree with CarterGlass. The gun I didn't notice, but the leg movement was weird and kind of took away from the piece because it bothered me so much. Not a lot of people have a gap between their legs when they walk. They should be a little closer together. But, this reminds me of an RP I used to be a part of online. It was in space and the technology I imagined is all there. The music was awesome. Good job. And I'd like a series of this. :)