Ughh
This is horriby, horribly unoriginal. Sprite flashes can be good, but this is basically a SMBZ clone. Try not to copy SMBZ page for page next time. =/
Ughh
This is horriby, horribly unoriginal. Sprite flashes can be good, but this is basically a SMBZ clone. Try not to copy SMBZ page for page next time. =/
ooook........
the same smbz music and the same kind of dbz sprites effects....
a recolored bowser with blue and red?...
mario and sonic flash stories are a bit not-original, if you want to make this awesome, you must work in the story making this more interesting. and make good backgrounds fights.
heh
the other reviews have been quite soft in telling you this so i'll just say it...
its a complete rip-off. not a parody, not a coincidence.
its really unoriginal dude. Nice of you to put in the effort but its not working, not with this plotline.
Heres a hint:
Animate, dont write. If this is the best that you can do, you should seriously consider letting someone else write for you. The animation was fine but the extremely generic script and extremely overused plot made me throw up a little in my mouth.
I have seen it before
So I have to agree a bit with budge007. Alvin has made something interesting and good. This may seem sort of like a rip-of. Maybe figure out something new? You can make something, but don't do what a lot of people have allready tried.