Not bad, but
Flat chested girls cant be on front page, same goes for beggers
Reviews for "POD#1 * My Broken Wings *"
i think it was hard to understand
it needs more stuff to make it easier to understand. i didnt like it b/c it bored me.
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I don't know about this flash. I liked the animation and most of your backgrounds and moods were movie-esque.
My problem is with your plot, to be honest... I found it amazingly corny. And unoriginal. It's the same... 'mystical kingdom with a person who can either save or destroy the world, falls in love with protecter, yadda yadda'.
Plus... voice acting and sound effects don't bite. They might help you. : )
I'm just trying to be truthful, not mean, BTW. Keep going and maybe this will develop and become a nice flash story. ^_^
Black-Crystal responds:
hmm.. nothing in this world can be totally original, you can only modify something and make it better.
I may try using voices and sound effects if they doesnt ruin my flash..
I like truthful and polite reviews like yours :)
A plain start...
The story is very...well, simple but it's supposed to be a series so it was so far a very uninteresting opening. The music was pretty boring to me, I found myself drifting off from the eppy now and then. Sound effects would also do you wonders.
The best appealing thing though was the amount of art and detail you were able to make with a mouse, which I know from experience is a very frustrating thing to do. Bravo on that!
weak
boring....i almost fell asleep, not a good sign. that animation was OK. some of the side views seemed real weak. im not so much of a anime fan too, but still needs more, a lot more for me to wanna watch part two.