Reviews for POD#1 * My Broken Wings *

[behemothjosh]

whats to understand?

I didn't read the opening text but I didn't need to. It seems like character development, a fight, and some emotional content. I agree its a little slow, but the graphics, animation, and story were pretty good. It would definately be nice to see the next part of the story. I would recommend dimming the music and adding some sounds. Maybe even a voice over narration of the storyline thusfar during the very slow beginning instead of the opening text that I'm sure very few people want to take the time to read.

[epoch98]

little slow subtitles annoying overall pretty good

A little slow, but it seems to pick up after a while. Very short howerer, and it would have been a lot better if we could hear the characters speak instead of having to read the subtitles. Besides that it was an interesting story, and i'm failry interested to see what happens next.

[MelodiousOrpheus]

almost there

The foundations for this series is incredibly strong. I like the basis for the plot quite interesting and similar to a couple fantasies novel's i've read. the actual character drawings were mediocre but that is not was pulling down the flash. This is mostly FBF like you said but not enough FBF. With average characters and well done FBF the pace of this series could be more thrilling and capture the mood more. It almost seems as if you were creating scenes this flash around moments where there would be a minimum of action and then tried to pass it off as a "dramatic" moment. FBF is hard work and if you put in a few months at just a steady pace this series would stop being mediocre and go to freaking amazing. Please do this, too many people get burned out on these series and what not. And make it good enough to get fron't page so I don't have to go search for it ;) but you know good luck!

[Iron-Chef-Takun]

Not bad.

Pretty good animation, and relatively interesting story. That particular song didn't seem to fit to well with what I was watching though; a mellow, emoish song with an action oriented flash (except for the beginning).

Actually, to be honest, I hated the song. But it won't affect my vote. If you make another I probably will watch it though. :) Keep it up.

[sudakin1]

not bad...

i give it a 7\10