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Reviews for "POD#1 * My Broken Wings *"

Well, it was okay, but...

Let me get one thing clear first: I like this work, and I think this has potential as a series.

Regarding the artwork, considering you only used a mouse, you did pretty good. However, my biggest beef with this movie is pacing and audio. On pacing, the dramatic moments took too long at times, especially at the begining. And this movie would benefit immensly from soundbytes and dialogue. yeah, it's not easy to get quality soundbytes, but it's just my opinion...

Storywise, you've got something here. Really.

All in all, I will wait for part 2 (and 3 and 4 and 5...)

Not bad.

Pretty good animation, and relatively interesting story. That particular song didn't seem to fit to well with what I was watching though; a mellow, emoish song with an action oriented flash (except for the beginning).

Actually, to be honest, I hated the song. But it won't affect my vote. If you make another I probably will watch it though. :) Keep it up.

"Overall" is an average. 6.666 rounded up

Graphics - Amazing, I saw some techniques here I hadn't seen before. Keep it up!

Style - Definitely had its own. The original idea didn't hurt any either.

Sound - The song didn't appeal to me much, but it fit the mood of the movie very well.

Violence - No blood/gore, but that's appreciated. Simple fighting will do.

Interactivity - You point, click and watch. Simple enough.

Humor - The battle scene brought a smile to my face.

Overall - 7/10 Very inspiring!

not bad...

i give it a 7\10

Meh

The storyline was interesting and it looks like you took time on it, but the song should've been background noise, not the only sound file. I liked it, but you should never end an episode and continue the next one with a flashback. Outside of the flashback, nothing was going on either. It was good work, but next time try to include more than just a flashback and a song.