Reviews for POD#1 * My Broken Wings *

[Kit630]

Pretty nifty

Pretty nice. Some of the graphics were a little clunky, but overall they were pretty good. The style is great, I like the sort of futuristic feel mixed with the whole demons thing. You might want to work on the opening story just a bit. The sound I give a 5, the music was good but you need some voice actors if you really want to pull off a good score for sound. Violence, 5. There's fighting, but not a lot of gore. Thats not a negative, though. No interactivity, no humor, but its not that type of flash. Overall, good job. 7, you could step up some of the movement to make it smoother and more human, study how people move and apply it. Then get some voice actors and you're good to go.

Make some more, that's my last suggestion. You'll only get better if you keep making them.

[dead-ringer1]

Not bad, but could be better

Certainly this was not too bad at all. The animation was good, but it still needs some work to make it so thats its 'just so'. Its a good story line idea drawn in a Japanese cartoon style. Fortunatly theres no badly timed dubed over voices with bad English accents (unlike Japanese cartoons).

What you wanted to put across was put across very well, but could be done better. Its one of those things that is good but theres something thats not quite right and could be done in a better way.

Black-Crystal responds:

hmm.. i know i can done better but doing the fbf using mouse can be quite tiring which you will naturally be lazy..

hm.... although voices may ruin my flash but i may risk it..

[lamasmi]

nice

Very Nice..

[BassMasterFei]

Aww.

I was afraid it was going to be to the Trinity Blood song. I liked the Buck Tick one better. Anyways, it was alright. I think you did a pretty good job in the second half, but there just wasn't much actual animation in the beginning (just stills and a little tweening), which is probably something to avoid when it comes to Newgrounds audiences :P.

Anyway, a little slow-moving at times, but it has pretty good art.

[enlighten1]

hmmnn

i know im gonna sound like a jerk but...
the story, although cliched, is a pretty good concept. You should really consider getting a tablet as it will help your flash alot. Also, have you thought about putting the setting of the story in a more medievil place instead of one that is supposedly futuristic? or maybe some it kinda weird to have one cyberpunk fitted guy and snow falling on fields. If it is the future shouldn't there be lots of cities or at least ruins? chaning the characters' clothes might get more people to like it more. add more armor to the knights so that they look more like guardians. just my opinion so don't feel bad. the story is what kept me watching, so flesh it out a bit more.

Black-Crystal responds:

I already planned to put armors, chains , belts but then i will have a difficult time animating..