little slow subtitles annoying overall pretty good
A little slow, but it seems to pick up after a while. Very short howerer, and it would have been a lot better if we could hear the characters speak instead of having to read the subtitles. Besides that it was an interesting story, and i'm failry interested to see what happens next.
Above-Average
Music sucked AND was of bad quality, for starters. And I do realize what you said about being original and being creative about that is logical, but this episode is completely cliched, nothing really shines out about it. Drawings were alot better than what I could hope to achieve, although the girl just seems she has a larger face than she should, just saying.
Other then that, it was good.
i like the song fits the flash alot!
this flash reminds me of all of the RPG's i've played like final fantasy 10.......but the flash greatly reminds me of GRANDIA! the best RPG game i've ever played saddest RPG and pretty long
yes im talking bout GRANDIA 2! ever played it? didnt? play it! if u have i feel im not the only one! R.I.P MAREG!
almost there
The foundations for this series is incredibly strong. I like the basis for the plot quite interesting and similar to a couple fantasies novel's i've read. the actual character drawings were mediocre but that is not was pulling down the flash. This is mostly FBF like you said but not enough FBF. With average characters and well done FBF the pace of this series could be more thrilling and capture the mood more. It almost seems as if you were creating scenes this flash around moments where there would be a minimum of action and then tried to pass it off as a "dramatic" moment. FBF is hard work and if you put in a few months at just a steady pace this series would stop being mediocre and go to freaking amazing. Please do this, too many people get burned out on these series and what not. And make it good enough to get fron't page so I don't have to go search for it ;) but you know good luck!
i thought seal meant an animal
i got a little confused when i was reading it. I hought i meant 11 seals as in those kinds of animals. some pauses were a little too slow. needs improvement for the drawings of the faces