Got a little boring...
The Animation itself was really nice and smooth in my opinion, and that is something you can really work with. But the style with no voices, mixed with the mood, and the music made this get a little dull after awhile. You can work on story and emotion AFTER you have grabbed your audience, and this submission didn't do it for me. Good Luck with your next submission though, I will be looking forward to seeing how you improved.
Aint that great
This wasnt that great. However it does deserve front page. I think the song doesnt have great quality it sucked well the music.
Needs a little touch
The artwork is awesome good! The animation is nice too..
But the whole movie goes so much too slowly, and that makes it so borring to watch. Speed it up! Why so slow? was it just because the movie should fit to the song? just cut some of the moments when the movie stands still away, so the wievers just get the most important stuff. Another thing is the music, It it's a quite happy song, eh? it's not good when this flash appears to be a little sad, so just speed it up and add some little more atmospheric music without lyric on, then it will get so much better....Think about it!
Not so good but
anyways excellent artwork, but the face of the girl in the first scene was kinda crappy, it was too large, and the faces in general and the lack of background where the things that I think you should improve, besides that, a kickass storyñine, not too original but cool, excellent sound and there aint too much violence but it's better that way, if there is to many blood the series would loose some originality*.
*i'm foreign so i dont know if that's the way it should be written or if its even a word but i guess you got my point bye, keep up the hardwork and the life will smile you :D
I am still trying to improve on drawing the faces and bodies..
Too much violence and blood will look like dragonball or naruto and my style isnt like those animes..
ok thn
ok that was all good apart from that reli did drag on abd after the thing saying what tia about it made no sense