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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 18th, 2012 @ 03:42 PM Reply

At 9/18/12 03:00 PM, HiryuGouki wrote:
At 9/18/12 02:43 PM, Mownkey wrote:
At 9/18/12 02:19 PM, HiryuGouki wrote: Someone help me find the finger formation...I took a close up of this on Photoshop, and I was absolutely confused...Should I like make the hands bigger or something?
This one is flawless. Good job!
You sure you can't find a flaw in there somewhere? I personally am having a hard time finding where I should draw the fingers in the line art, but I am pretty sure that if I darken it a little in Photoshop, it will make the fingers easier to find.

Stomach should be bigger and so should the chest, hands should be just a tad bigger, hands with the fingers stretched out should be about 5/6th the length of the head. Eye should be a lot smaller, feet should be about 1 and 1/3 the length of the face. And there are some more anatomy mistakes but I can't really describe them with just words and I don't have access to my photoshop atm.

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 18th, 2012 @ 03:47 PM Reply

At 9/18/12 03:42 PM, Ludic wrote:
feet should be about 1 and 1/3 the length of the face.

Ignore that, wrong number. 1 and 1/6*

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 18th, 2012 @ 03:56 PM Reply

Stomach should be bigger and so should the chest, hands should be just a tad bigger, hands with the fingers stretched out should be about 5/6th the length of the head. Eye should be a lot smaller, feet should be about 1 and 1/3 the length of the face. And there are some more anatomy mistakes but I can't really describe them with just words and I don't have access to my photoshop atm.

Alright, I would agree if I were drawing her realistically, and yeah, you're right. Correcting the feet and hands should be easy enough, so I can just do that right away if need be. Also, part of her torso is hidden by her arm, but even so, I could widen her abdomen a bit. Also, I just realized the feet are about 1/3 bigger than your hands, so I'll be looking at increasing the size of that as well. I will post the edits in a couple of hours, and as always, I appreciate your feedback.


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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 18th, 2012 @ 04:07 PM Reply

At 9/18/12 03:47 PM, Ludic wrote:
At 9/18/12 03:42 PM, Ludic wrote:
feet should be about 1 and 1/3 the length of the face.
Ignore that, wrong number. 1 and 1/6*

I just put my hand to my face, and it was only about 3/4 the length of my head.


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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 18th, 2012 @ 04:16 PM Reply

At 9/18/12 04:07 PM, HiryuGouki wrote:

I just put my hand to my face, and it was only about 3/4 the length of my head.

You've either got a long face or a short hand then bro. :P

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 18th, 2012 @ 06:35 PM Reply

At 9/18/12 04:16 PM, Ludic wrote:
At 9/18/12 04:07 PM, HiryuGouki wrote:

I just put my hand to my face, and it was only about 3/4 the length of my head.
You've either got a long face or a short hand then bro. :P

Eh...Probably...I looked into those things you talked about with the picture, and I have corrected them as of now, so it should look a little better. Here it is:

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 19th, 2012 @ 01:13 PM Reply

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 19th, 2012 @ 01:21 PM Reply

Got rid of those pesky .png errors.

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 19th, 2012 @ 07:06 PM Reply

At 9/18/12 06:35 PM, HiryuGouki wrote:
At 9/18/12 04:16 PM, Ludic wrote:
At 9/18/12 04:07 PM, HiryuGouki wrote:

I just put my hand to my face, and it was only about 3/4 the length of my head.
You've either got a long face or a short hand then bro. :P
Eh...Probably...I looked into those things you talked about with the picture, and I have corrected them as of now, so it should look a little better. Here it is:

I feel like the axe blade should be facing the other way but that could just be because i'm a picky fucker.

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 19th, 2012 @ 08:31 PM Reply

At 9/19/12 07:06 PM, Jester wrote:
At 9/18/12 06:35 PM, HiryuGouki wrote:
At 9/18/12 04:16 PM, Ludic wrote:
At 9/18/12 04:07 PM, HiryuGouki wrote:

I just put my hand to my face, and it was only about 3/4 the length of my head.
You've either got a long face or a short hand then bro. :P
Eh...Probably...I looked into those things you talked about with the picture, and I have corrected them as of now, so it should look a little better. Here it is:
I feel like the axe blade should be facing the other way but that could just be because i'm a picky fucker.

That's a fair assessment, but even so, I only put it that way because I wanted the ax to make it into the photographed sketch.


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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 20th, 2012 @ 08:10 PM Reply

At 9/19/12 01:21 PM, HiryuGouki wrote: Got rid of those pesky .png errors.

looks much better.

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 21st, 2012 @ 10:22 AM Reply

At 9/20/12 08:10 PM, TheMajormel wrote:
At 9/19/12 01:21 PM, HiryuGouki wrote: Got rid of those pesky .png errors.
looks much better.

Thank you. : )


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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 21st, 2012 @ 12:34 PM Reply

A logo I made...

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 21st, 2012 @ 12:52 PM Reply

Better version...

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 21st, 2012 @ 11:58 PM Reply

I really need help with this pose. Can someone please demonstrate the proper arm placement so I can redraw this? I am genuinely stumped here.

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 22nd, 2012 @ 09:00 PM Reply

Aww...Come on! No comments in 20 hours?!! This is ridiculous! Go ahead, Ra Nae, Nae...Do your worst...I await your wrath. However, allow me to show you this:

This piece is relatively old, from like 2 years ago.

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 22nd, 2012 @ 11:36 PM Reply

At 9/22/12 09:04 PM, Escalus wrote:
At 9/22/12 09:00 PM, HiryuGouki wrote: Aww...Come on! No comments in 20 hours?!! This is ridiculous! Go ahead, Ra Nae, Nae...Do your worst...I await your wrath. However, allow me to show you this:

This piece is relatively old, from like 2 years ago.
People's time doesn't revolve around you, they have things to do other than cater to you whenever you ask. It's called being patient.

I guess so...By the way, could you help me with that pose I posted earlier? I want to draw her holding the rifle, but it's becoming very convoluted and I am pretty much scrapping the drawing altogether.


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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 23rd, 2012 @ 05:28 PM Reply

I am practicing more complex poses. Be sure to check the follow up post that will be coming probably tomorrow, due to time limitations. It may come tonight at the earliest, so just check it out later, and please comment, and if you can, PLEASE help find some decent references. My poses are a little...Complex, and hence, I can't find any good references on Google or anywhere. Thank you!


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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 24th, 2012 @ 06:40 AM Reply

At 9/23/12 05:28 PM, HiryuGouki wrote: I am practicing more complex poses. Be sure to check the follow up post that will be coming probably tomorrow, due to time limitations. It may come tonight at the earliest, so just check it out later, and please comment, and if you can, PLEASE help find some decent references. My poses are a little...Complex, and hence, I can't find any good references on Google or anywhere. Thank you!

Gimmie an hour or two and i'll be home where my bookmarks are and i'll let you in on my secret stash of sweet sweet reference.

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 24th, 2012 @ 07:11 AM Reply

Gimmie an hour or two and i'll be home where my bookmarks are and i'll let you in on my secret stash of sweet sweet reference.

Thanks a lot!


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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 24th, 2012 @ 07:26 AM Reply

At 9/24/12 07:11 AM, HiryuGouki wrote:
Gimmie an hour or two and i'll be home where my bookmarks are and i'll let you in on my secret stash of sweet sweet reference.
Thanks a lot!

i've never seen you draw dudes but if you're gonna do that sometime
Fight photos, MMA, etc. mainly dudes
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lots of faces and some action poses mainly women
literally thousands of poses mostly women
Hands and how they work

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 27th, 2012 @ 07:49 PM Reply

At 9/21/12 11:58 PM, HiryuGouki wrote: I really need help with this pose. Can someone please demonstrate the proper arm placement so I can redraw this? I am genuinely stumped

Flip the legs, as in put the left leg down and the right leg up.

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 29th, 2012 @ 09:59 AM Reply

This is an awesome sketch!

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 29th, 2012 @ 10:00 AM Reply

This is what I have done fo far on this. The background will be finished soon.

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 30th, 2012 @ 01:29 AM Reply

Sorry for the low quality. I had to make this under 15 KB.

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Sep. 30th, 2012 @ 07:17 PM Reply

Sup?

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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Oct. 1st, 2012 @ 11:06 AM Reply

At 9/30/12 07:17 PM, HiryuGouki wrote: Sup?

That's a fucking DA smiley. Quit making gimmicky icons and actually focus on the bigger picture.


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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Oct. 1st, 2012 @ 01:08 PM Reply

At 10/1/12 11:06 AM, IloveNantes wrote:
At 9/30/12 07:17 PM, HiryuGouki wrote: Sup?
That's a fucking DA smiley. Quit making gimmicky icons and actually focus on the bigger picture.

I will, I will. It's just that I am under a lot of stress right now, what with college and all that.


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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Oct. 1st, 2012 @ 02:47 PM Reply

At 10/1/12 01:08 PM, HiryuGouki wrote: I will, I will. It's just that I am under a lot of stress right now, what with college and all that.

No-one's WAITING for your thread to bump nor do you HAVE to keep it alive with pointless stuff. It'll stay on page 1 for quite a while. Just upload something when you feel it's worthwhile.


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Response to My Art Thread Re-do Oct. 1st, 2012 @ 11:48 PM Reply

I will, I will. It's just that I am under a lot of stress right now, what with college and all that.
No-one's WAITING for your thread to bump nor do you HAVE to keep it alive with pointless stuff. It'll stay on page 1 for quite a while. Just upload something when you feel it's worthwhile.

Alright; I will keep that in mind. Thank you.


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