Reviews for Adventure High Clean 0.34

[DredLrd]

Tell the people who are uncomfortable to fuck off. If they don't like it as it was, then they don't have to play it. Unless you didn't want to have adult themes in the game, of course, in which case continue on with the new direction.

Actual game criticism:
The new character art is a bit too busy and low resolution.
A bit too much like some weeb from Tumbler who can't draw very well but decided to add as many effects as they could. The blushing, tiny mouths, and eyes are my biggest problem

The writing is good enough. I can't complain.

It would be nice to be able to use the mouse to go through dialogue.

Good work so far. Keep it up.

HypnoChanger responds:

It's not a new direction; it's sort of a parallel version for people who don't like the mature content but would otherwise still want to play the game. The main version of the game is still being updated as the main version, with this version having any on-screen nudity or text that is too explicit removed. The main version just says it's a few versions behind because that was the title I uploaded it with and I'm not sure if updating the title might mess with saves.

If you would believe it, the artist is actually used to making the eyes even larger than this. I don't think the problem is so much that they can't draw well, and more that they are used to certain style choices that don't work as well with this specific project. I've been working with them to make adjustments based on feedback though.

Unfortunately, advancing by clicking the mouse is tricky due to the spell menu being controlled by the mouse during many conversations. I have not yet figured out a good way to make the game tell the difference between a click to advance the story and a click to use the menu. As soon as I do figure something out though I'll make the change.

Thanks. I have been trying to increase my work pace each month with varying degrees of success. I am hoping to keep getting better as I go.

[HaroAragon]

i HATE when i have no stamina left !

HypnoChanger responds:

You can get more stamina by using the rest command during battle, or by exiting the dungeon and re-entering at the latest sigil you've found.

[AACMIV]

Eh, for a game still in the works, this is going good. However though, I do see some areas of the game that could work in the long run. For example, "Doll Body" could be an upgrade for Stone Skin. Or how controlling the ghost would actually lead to a heart felt talk between mother and child before you let her go, giving you the upgrade (though a lesser version of it)

HypnoChanger responds:

Thanks. I do have some plans for the possession spell and further plot resolution with Sarah and her Mom; but I have not yet had time to write them yet. Trying to balance progress on multiple plotlines so that one plotline doesn't get too far ahead of all the others.

[Ericho]

How odd. I think this is literally the first dating sim I've found with medals. I wasn't good at it. I never was good at these games. Well, at least I tried. The animation was kind of awkward here.

The music was nice. A lot of the backgrounds looked off. You really had to go through a lot here. I'm glad it at least had variety. I'd recommend it to fans of the genre.

HypnoChanger responds:

Thanks. Yeah, unfortunately all the backgrounds are still my old, bad art. I have been working with some artists to update and replace the old art but have not yet gotten to replacing the backgrounds. Hoping to get them replaced as soon as I can though.

[AmunGenocide]

Buggy. I got into Val's mindscape, and then started out inside of a wall. I managed to get out of that one, but when I went to go after the first sigil I went one space above it, and appeared deep inside the walls of another floor with no way out.

HypnoChanger responds:

Sorry about that. I made a new sprite in this update and missed adjusting for the new size of the sprite on those floors. I thought I had fixed it last night but must still have the numbers slightly off. I will have a fix uploading in a few minutes.