you spelled a bunch of the subtitles wrong, I had huge problems with the facial proportions in a number of scenes, and what was with the immediate collateral damage from the landing? i mean who was that guy? was he just an extra?
apart from that it was reasonable. it flows a lot like most anime especially how all the characters keep saying ominous junk and rarely explain anything. don't get me wrong that's sometimes a plus. anyway if you could step up the art and subtitles a bit for episode 2 I'd be happy to give it a 5. as for this one i enjoyed it, but it wasn't all it could have been so i feel a 4 is appropriate.
as a side note for all you grammar [german soldiers during the years of WWII] reading this and getting pissed off at my lack of capitalization of the first letter of every sentence and maybe a few i's here and there, thanks for caring.