I really like the idea, and i'm going to keep an eye out for future episodes. The only major criticism I have is that there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors in the text that took me out of the story more than once. Make sure to edit your writing as much as possible before submitting your work. Other than that and a few minor nit picks (The Big Bang Kamehameha is Gogeta's move, not Vegito's), you've got something great going here.
Reviews for "Dragon Ball Multiverse 1"
Hahahaha. You know, it will be funny if there exist an universe where Mr. Satan (Hercule) its really the stronger warrior of the universe! xD
Good job, man! You are in the correct way!
bocodamondo responds:
yeah. there is a team with only humans. i wish satan were on them ^^
very enteresting it would be nice if u could get some voice actors for the various characters but other than that it looks cool : )
I love DBZM, i readed it on the spanish place... But seeing it animated its interesting! Just one thing: U can do the auras... better.
For EvilMonkey (The guy under me) : This is before DBZ ... DBGT was a shit.
bocodamondo responds:
i CAN do auras better...but i requrie alof of "blur" for it and MAN! BLUR MAKES FLASH REALLY LAGGY!
so i better dont do it.
I think it was damn good but i will give it a 4 and not a 5 because of all the reading and how fast some of the texts scrolled before you can even finish reading a line. Add voices and you have a damn good thing going here because your animation and art work is already great.
bocodamondo responds:
sorry about the text speed . flash 8 turns into a total bitch when the flash project gets big. so i could not make the texts stays longer without getting over 9000 crashes