As a DBM reader, I think you did really well, you should spell check your work tho and if possible find a way to add voices, even though hardcore fans would of course say "that sounds nothing like Goku!"... It was really dope, you should continue making these and maybe funimation might see the idea of DBM finally and possibly make a small series or something to please all Dragonball Fans.. #my opinion
Reviews for "Dragon Ball Multiverse 1"
bocodamondo responds:
i sure had a lot of voice acting request. yesterdat. i might add some in EP2
great ending with a cool twist with cell
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very good stuff.
It´s really amazing, probably not professional. But it Rocks!
I´m JohanDark the artist of the Special Universe 1 of Dragon Ball Multiverse. (the one of the Kaioshins that is now been published in Multiverse).
My only critic would be that there are some moments that you stop the animation... basically when there is the kame ha or the big bang attacks... and then when there is a conversation with the vargas you go really Fast and it´s hard to follow reading.
Congratulations for your effort! ;) But don´t be hurry... try to make great art before do faster art... People would apreciate it more! ;) and you are doing a great job. Thanks!
bocodamondo responds:
oh hey ^^ yeah im watching your special sor. its pretty good :)
.but yeah your critic is right. however this is just my first try ofcourse. and since i read all the critics from all the guys here
i know what i did wrong here . wich of course will result me to avoid those in Episode 2 to make it better :)
thanks