The audio needs some fixing.
Other than that I liked the flash.
Reviews for "The Beast Snacks 1"
What
I'm sorry, I just don't understand where the entertainment comes from. The Main characters were orphaned so they trained martial arts? By themselves? I'm sorry what? The story is incredibly vague as to why these two want to win the Tournament anyways, just because they can? I'm just uncertain if you're trying to copy dragon ball deliberately or what. Then the story shifts to some giant hairy monster wanting a Snack? Is this supposed to be funny? Serious? I'm sorry what?
needs some more work
this clip feels like other anime/video game story. and you never really tell what so important about the beast thing but you did get my curiosity so i will see the next one. and basicly im saying what everyone else is saying.
STORY WAS A BIT SHAKY
Theres a lot of needless hating I see in the comments. As the author, you should listen to what people think about the things you make, but that doesn't always make them right. If this is like your first flash (or, say, first product of this length and purpose), then you did an outstanding job. The animation is pretty decent, not awesome, but pretty decent. The audio quality isn't that great, and I only found one of the voice actors to have much effort put into his character(s). Overall, this was pretty good, but I think it could have been much better. I'm sure that now you guys have experience, your next episode will be far, far better.
Yah lowzeey bum!
While the animation is ..decent(they look deformed at times), the concept I actually find to be really creative in a way. Like a dragon ball type thing with some original ideas up in theyah. The script could use some more humor, or something to keep me from being broed to death when they're not fighting. The Voicing could be a lot better ,as well as the actual audio quality. The ending song, well I'm not gonna say much..cuz I could barley hear the shit.
This actually has a lot of potential, and maybe one day I'll beat off to it with my friends.