sigh
You've got the dialogue down perfect. Just take the extra time to actually animate it instead of using stills. This barely qualifies as an animation. As I said, the voice acting and the dialogue are great. It astounds me how this makes front page, and I wouldn't have even passed this while it was under judgment in the Flash Portal. If you were to redo these with some effort, then they would most definitly be worth of the front page.