i dont really like this much
well i saw the art and i was like Wow this person could have thier own cartoon some day but also i realized it was very disproportionate(im not sure on the word damn spell check) i watch anime like death note and FMA but i and i noticed that the head was way to big compared to the body the unless you were going for a chibby then you need to shrink the head and make the person taller and head more heart shaped the shoulders i think were pretty well done but you really should work on the voice acting but i believe in a year or two youll have you own little cartoon on tv