simply astounding.
i love the story line and the voice actors are perfect fit for the people. the drawing could use a little work as you said but its still pretty good. the anamation was smooth and well done. and the music fit perfectly with the mood and setting you were trying to show us. i really do believe this deserves to be made into an anime :) good work and happy animating my talented friend :)
Good
Like your drawing
lol
"was fainted"? how about "was unconscious"; or "had fainted." Please take a little more time on the writing. And you really expect me to believe that she picked his big ass up at the end? lol Overall good though.
nice at all
nice your face drawings are awesome also the upper body but the legs and the car( specially when she stopped in front of the guy) were in nedd of improvement
MILLY!! (trigun)
THATS who the face reminds me of! anywho sounds fun, and an interesting story so far! ^^ cool stuff :D