Beautiful music!
Life is cyclic but not so primitive! Thanks to music composer. He saved all movie and strengthen sentimental parts of it.
Beautiful music!
Life is cyclic but not so primitive! Thanks to music composer. He saved all movie and strengthen sentimental parts of it.
You would be surprised how primitive life can be... Everyone still has primal instincts...
not bad
a little long tho in between scenes i feel. loved the main's porno stache...
I liked it but...
Good drawings here, but that all it was. Very little in the way of animation going on here. Also, you pretty much took this story line from the song "Cat's in the Cradle" and expanded upon it slightly. Overall, good but not great, personally don't think it deserves front page.
ehhhh
i'm sorry, the background gradient colors were really nicely done, and the animation was ok, it's just that the characters and objects were just really sloppy and not well done. The characters looked so unfinished, like test drawings, and not good ones either. That kind of test drawing look you had looked especially bad when you combined it in scenes with fully drawn and colored in objects like the coffin, it just looked like laziness to me. Also, a few things ruined the mood, like the obnoxious Newgrounds license plate in their, it seems like every flash nowadays is getting branded with NG somewhere in it. Also you misspelled 'loneliness' which you could have easily looked up.
Aside from that, I thought it was going to be just another one of those stories where you see the life of one person from birth to death that's really unoriginal, but i did like the fact that you had the stories of the different generations intertwined, that's something I haven't seen before. Ok piece just put a bit more effort in.
Hey thanks for your review, its probably the most intuitive review i've seen in a while... Yeah I keep forgetting to fix the spelling error, the character drawings were of choice, in a way they kinda were WIP's but the people that I showed to said they perferred it that way. If I was to do everything in full color, I was afraid it would have brought away from the meaning. But who knows.
Thanks for the review and vote.
could use some work
It was moving, especially with such a great song, but I think you could've done infinitely better on the animation... I can understand how so many still frames could've helped set the mood, but..... the entire thing was practically just still frames...